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Friday, March 7, 2008

Shattered Pieces of My Heart


This heart that pumps
The sweet nectar of life
Has been broken like shattered glass
For it has been shattered so many times
The pieces of my heart are scattered
Like the glass on from a broken window
Every time my heart shatters
I kneel down and start to pick the pieces
Of my once whole heart
The only thing that will hold them together
Is the love of a true soul mate

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

*claps* i like this one and im in the same vote with you *thumbs up*
-Jared

Anonymous said...

very good. i can relate to it.

Anonymous said...

seems repetetive

Anonymous said...

LOL

Anonymous said...

i absolutly love your poem. i can relate to it.

Anonymous said...

I love the picture of the heart. Did you draw that? That's exactly what I have been looking for for my tattoo!

DeathAngel said...

Oh my gosh...I feel the same way...This guy totally shattered my heart and I've been feeling that only my true soul mate could ever fix it...

Anonymous said...

i luv the poem, its so deep n yet so sweet. be feelin the same way

Anonymous said...

I just wrote a poem called "Shattered Illusion". I think the concept is the same. I write poetry as well. I post them on Myspace. Feel free to read at your leisure.
myspace.com/lunaspurplelion
Profile name: Bella Donna

Anonymous said...

i write poems alot too i dont know some of mine sound similar to yours

Lizzy said...

wow... I feel that way right now, very good job, keep up the good work!

Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!

Anonymous said...

this iis reli gd, first one i've read but it's pretti cool...like it

Jessica said...

Well written and an emotional concept... the sketch is the perfect touch. I'm sorry if you feel the pain you write about.